I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Nicholas, great job this week. I really enjoyed your writing this week, especially your opening paragraph. It was very well written and caught my attention. Remember to include you N.L and R.T for your writing task next time.
For your activity 5 DLO, make sure next time you include subheadings for your small paragraphs of information. By using subheading the readers know which park of the body the information relates to.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Nicholas, great job this week.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your writing this week, especially your opening paragraph. It was very well written and caught my attention. Remember to include you N.L and R.T for your writing task next time.
For your activity 5 DLO, make sure next time you include subheadings for your small paragraphs of information. By using subheading the readers know which park of the body the information relates to.