I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Very cool Nic! I like how you were creative and made this into an animation. It definitely hooks the reader in and makes the want to watch the whole thing. It also makes it more interesting rather than reading a lot of information. Something I would suggest is making the writing in the speech bubbles bigger and think about how easy the coloured text to read is.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Very cool Nic! I like how you were creative and made this into an animation. It definitely hooks the reader in and makes the want to watch the whole thing. It also makes it more interesting rather than reading a lot of information. Something I would suggest is making the writing in the speech bubbles bigger and think about how easy the coloured text to read is.
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