I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work Nic. I really like you food pyramid and it looks like you digitally drew the food yourself. I think it's great you shared your thoughts about the food analyser. Maybe you could do some research to find out why fries have so much sodium.
I also like how you stated which activities you had already uploaded in separate blog posts so the reader knows.
The only suggestion I have is adding a few more labels to your post such as: online learning, LCS, lockdown, maths
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Nice work Nic.
ReplyDeleteI really like you food pyramid and it looks like you digitally drew the food yourself. I think it's great you shared your thoughts about the food analyser. Maybe you could do some research to find out why fries have so much sodium.
I also like how you stated which activities you had already uploaded in separate blog posts so the reader knows.
The only suggestion I have is adding a few more labels to your post such as: online learning, LCS, lockdown, maths