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Tuesday, September 7, 2021

Deku VS Bakugou T3 W7 Writing

 This is my writing for T3 W7 and our topic was Heroes VS Villains so I decided to narrate the battle between Deku and Bakugou in Volume 2 MHA. 

For context:

Quirk = Superpower

One for all = Deku's Quirk

This is from Deku's point of view.

NL: To narrate

RT: precise verbs

I can’t believe it, we’re doing battle training! I’ve been preparing for this for quite some time. Ooh, here comes All Might! “Hello students of Class 1-A! Today we are doing battle training. Indoor anti-personnel battle training.  The villains will be hiding a nuclear weapon in the hideout. The villains either protect the bomb until the time runs out, or capture the heroes. The heroes either have to capture the villains, or secure the nuclear weapon. We will be separated into pairs of two. Heroes and Villains.” He puts people into groups of two. I was paired with Uraraka. All Might gave each pair a letter of the alphabet. Me and Uraraka got “A”  Once that was settled, he would announce who would be fighting. “The heroes are team A, the villains are team D!” It took a while for me to realize who was in team D. Tenya and Bakugou. The villain team goes in first. When the timer starts in five minutes the hero team has to sneak in. The rest of the class will watch via cctv.

I was scared. I was scared because when me and Bakugou were younger, he was always the superior one. He and his friends always bullied me for not having a quirk. I always felt like the odd one out. But now that will change. I will prove to Bakugou that I can be as cool as he is, and as strong as he is. We discussed our plan then once the timer started we snuck inside the building. I think to myself “I can’t control One for all, so we’ll have to manage with my natural strength, and Uraraka’s zero gravity quirk.” There were lots of blind corners so we had to watch out. As soon as I thought that Bakugou came from a corner and sneak attacked us. BOOM. Luckily I was fortunate enough to dodge his attack as I had only gotten a graze. He tried to right hook me, but luckily I knew better. I counter-attacked and I grabbed his right arm and threw him on the ground. I always take note of the heroes who I thought were awesome. While me and Bakugou were fighting, Uraraka went off to try to secure the weapon, to increase our chances of winning. But Tenya was a very competent defender. He took note of Uraraka’s quirk to levitate things she touched, and used it to his own advantage. He got rid of all of the objects in the room.


 Time is running out and if we don’t secure the weapon in time, we will lose. But then Bakugou said something. “The sweat glands on my palms secrete stuff like nitroglycerin. That's how I make my explosions.” He’s not going to do it…. Is he? BOOOM ! Bakugou’s quirks allowed him to store that fluid to create explosions. The more he stores, the bigger the explosions. Uraraka thought that this would be a perfect time to make a move. All she had to do to secure the weapon was to touch it. She leaped over Tenya’s head and as she was about to touch the weapon, Tenya stole it right off her. Uraraka was counting on me. But Bakugou wouldn’t stop until I was dead. He kept on beating me up, he wouldn’t stop. I felt this feeling of hopelessness,  that I should just give up. I will never be as good as Bakugou anyway. But there was a spark of determination. A spark that I felt, that said I should keep going. I had a plan. Uraraka’s quirk allowed her to levitate anything she touched. So I decided to do All Might’s signature attack. Detroit Smash. This would allow plenty of debris from the building to rise up above where Uraraka was and allow her to use her quirk. “DETROIT…. SMASH!!!!” The ceiling burst open, with debris everywhere. Uraraka used a super attack called “Comet Home run” and all the debris flung towards Tenya. This gave her enough time to touch the weapon. 


Heroes..WIN!

After the battle, All Might announced that the V.I.P in this battle. It was Tenya. My classmate Momo explained why. Bakugou’s attacks were purely motivated by his hate for me. She also explained that using catastrophic attacks indoors was foolish. My performance suffered from the same faults. Uraraka lost focus halfway through the battle, and her attack was way too hazardous. She said that if it were a real nuclear weapon that attack would be unthinkable.

I enjoyed this activity because I like writing narratives.

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1 comment:

  1. Awesome piece of writing Nic! I am a big fan of MHA so I know exactly which part of the series you have written about and I think you did a good job. I noticed that you used some great precise verbs in this piece of writing which matches with your R.T, such as leaped instead of jumped.

    I think next time you could split your middle paragraph in two as it is quite long. For example, I would split the paragraph after the sentence "He got rid of all the objects in the room".

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