I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Fantastic work this week Nic! I thought your idea to improve the inlet was very creative. It was a great idea to think about how you can encourage people to join in on the project, and making the price cheaper is a great incentive.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Fantastic work this week Nic! I thought your idea to improve the inlet was very creative. It was a great idea to think about how you can encourage people to join in on the project, and making the price cheaper is a great incentive.
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