I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Nic, nice work this week! I really enjoyed watching the video explaining the fort you made. I feel like you have thought hard about including things that children would find really fun. Maybe next time you could describe the types of materials that would be used to create the fort, and how it will survive being out in the weather (waterproof etc...). I enjoyed reading your persuasive letter and like how you mentioned building a playground fort would help attract more people to the Pahurehure inlet.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Nic, nice work this week!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching the video explaining the fort you made. I feel like you have thought hard about including things that children would find really fun. Maybe next time you could describe the types of materials that would be used to create the fort, and how it will survive being out in the weather (waterproof etc...).
I enjoyed reading your persuasive letter and like how you mentioned building a playground fort would help attract more people to the Pahurehure inlet.