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Monday, November 30, 2020

Coin Operated

I am learning to summarise a short clip.

So a little  boy wanted to go to the moon and he was playing with his spaceship toy.  Then he came across a coin operated spaceship machine. He thought it would bring him to space so he asked his mother for 5 cents. His mother gave him 5 cents to go into the machine and when he went into the machine and started it, he was very disappointed. It didn’t bring him to space. So he got out sadly but he came across an ad for lemons. This gave him an idea to make a lemonade stand to get money so he could try the machine again. Then he sold lemonade for many many years, until he was an old man. He closed down his stand, and he took a big sack of money he had gotten over the years. He made his way across the road to get to the machine. When he got there he poured all his money into the machine and went in the machine. He pressed the button to start the machine. At first the machine didn’t work and he was sad. He pressed the button again. It didn’t work. For the last time he bashed the button. Then the machine’s engine started revving then he blasted off into the air, leaving a trail of smoke behind him. 
The end.

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