One day I went to mcdonalds and ordered a mcchicken, large fries and a frozen coke. As I waited for my order I went to the playground for 5 minutes and came back because I didn’t want to miss out on my meal. They called my number and I sat down and ate my mcchicken first. Then the worst thing happened. Santa devoured my soul and my mcchicken and fries, and he also consumed my frozen coke in a second. But then Ayushmaan the banana boy and Eden the electric shark came to the rescue and snatched my meal off Santa and gave back my soul. We escaped using the magic school bus and ran back to the fort. THE END
I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, December 25, 2019
Some weird story
For the summer learning journey we had to write a story. I didn't know if it had to be fiction or nonfiction, so I just chose fiction.
One day I went to mcdonalds and ordered a mcchicken, large fries and a frozen coke. As I waited for my order I went to the playground for 5 minutes and came back because I didn’t want to miss out on my meal. They called my number and I sat down and ate my mcchicken first. Then the worst thing happened. Santa devoured my soul and my mcchicken and fries, and he also consumed my frozen coke in a second. But then Ayushmaan the banana boy and Eden the electric shark came to the rescue and snatched my meal off Santa and gave back my soul. We escaped using the magic school bus and ran back to the fort. THE END
One day I went to mcdonalds and ordered a mcchicken, large fries and a frozen coke. As I waited for my order I went to the playground for 5 minutes and came back because I didn’t want to miss out on my meal. They called my number and I sat down and ate my mcchicken first. Then the worst thing happened. Santa devoured my soul and my mcchicken and fries, and he also consumed my frozen coke in a second. But then Ayushmaan the banana boy and Eden the electric shark came to the rescue and snatched my meal off Santa and gave back my soul. We escaped using the magic school bus and ran back to the fort. THE END
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Kia Ora Nicholas,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting short story! I’m glad you had Ayushmaan and Eden to rescue you from Santa? Did you include Santa because you wrote this on Christmas Day? Do you enjoy writing short stories? I enjoy reading them but I normally prefer to read a novel because it is a much longer story.
I look forward to reading more of your blog posts soon!
Blog ya later,
Dani