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Wednesday, December 25, 2019

Some weird story

For the summer learning journey we had to write a story. I didn't know if it had to be fiction or nonfiction, so I just chose fiction.

One day I went to mcdonalds and ordered a mcchicken, large fries and a frozen coke. As I waited for my order I went to the playground for 5 minutes and came back because I didn’t want to miss out on my meal. They called my number and I sat down and ate my mcchicken first. Then the worst thing happened. Santa devoured my soul and my mcchicken and fries, and he also consumed my frozen coke in a second. But then Ayushmaan the banana boy and Eden the electric shark came to the rescue and snatched my meal off Santa and gave back my soul. We escaped using the magic school bus and ran back to the fort. THE END

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Nicholas,

    What an interesting short story! I’m glad you had Ayushmaan and Eden to rescue you from Santa? Did you include Santa because you wrote this on Christmas Day? Do you enjoy writing short stories? I enjoy reading them but I normally prefer to read a novel because it is a much longer story.

    I look forward to reading more of your blog posts soon!

    Blog ya later,

    Dani

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