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Saturday, December 28, 2019

Through Careful Observation.

For the summer learning journey we had to choose one picture out of two and then describe it.

The starry night has lots of swirls. It has a dark blue and the stars illuminate the sky. The buildings are dark like the void. The stars light shines on the hills, revealing the green grass as it sways in the night breeze.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Nicholas
    My name is Tara. This is a really good description, well done!

    You've used very descriptive and interesting words like illuminate. My favorite sentence would be your last one, 'The stars light shines on the hills, revealing the green grass as it sways in the night breeze.'

    This is such a good piece of writing! I can't wait to see where your writing takes you in the future.

    Have a nice day
    Tara

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