This is my writing for W10 T2 and its about me encountering a kitsune in Japan.
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For the school holidays, me and my family went overseas to Japan. We landed in the Tokyo airport, then we took the train to our hotel. We were exhausted due to jet lag so for the first day in Japan we just slept. The next day something unexpected happened.
I decided to go for a walk by myself. I started to get tired so I took a shortcut home using a mysterious alleyway. There was a guy in a hoodie standing there .I walked him thinking nothing about it when suddenly I heard a rustling sound behind me. I looked behind me. The man that was previously there has now disappeared. But the weird thing was that when I turned back he reappeared as a kitsune.
It had sharp, deadly claws, nine long tails, and it looked like a fox. The calm walking had turned into running for my dear life. I sprinted towards the hotel which was just a few blocks away. I barged through the doors and the kitsune shortly followed. The place soon caught on fire due to the ability of the kitsune to generate fire. I barged into the room and thanks to the help of Google I knew how to defeat the kitsune. Me and my family grabbed the sharpest scissors and knives. The way to defeat the kitsune is to chop off all nine tails because one of them is the main source of power. SO we approached the kitsune and we cut off all the tails. My brother and dad held it down while my mum, my two sisters and I cut off the tails. We immediately evacuated the building because the kitsune set it on fire. THE END?
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