This is my writing task for T2 W9 and this story is a narrative.
RT: Use keywords.
Beginning:
It was shownight day. After weeks of practicing it had come to this day. I hopped into my mum's car and we drove off to school. It took about 5 minutes until we arrived at the school gate. I made my way to class to find out that no one was there.
Middle:
The lights were on and the class wasn’t locked. I entered the class. CREEK. Dead silence. All I could was the fluorescent lights buzzing. “Hello? Anyone there?” I asked. No response. It was unsettling. For a second I thought I was dreaming. So I slapped my face really hard, and it turns out I wasn’t dreaming and it turns out I wasn’t dreaming and I just slapped myself in the face really hard. So there really wasn’t anyone in the class. I checked the Kauri Hub, no one was there. I checked Room 9. No one was there. To make a long story short I checked all the classes and there was no one there. I thought to myself. “ Hmmm, there's something off.. I just can’t figure out what. It’s showtime but there's no in the classrooms. Also the classrooms look different than before.” So I decided to walk over to the auditorium. I checked if there's anyone there. No one except my mum. “Mum, there's something wrong here.” Mum responded with “Yeah, isn’t there supposed to be a show? I paid money to watch this!” Then someone passed the auditorium. It was the janitor. But it wasn’t Trevor. It was someone else. “HEY, WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!?” Mr Janitor exclaimed. Mum responded. “Isn't there supposed to be a show here!?” “No but Papakura Central School has a show though.”
End:
Me and my mum looked at each other in disbelief. “So youre saying that-” “This is Papakura Normal School.” So me and my mum hopped into the car and we zoomed back to school. Luckily they were just about to line up for La La La. I changed into my black clothes and then we absolutely demolished the show.
nice Nicholas i really like your writing keep up the great work like always.
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