I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wow, I feel like your writing could lead to more stories! How many boats had that giant squid taken down before meeting you and its death? Great poster - I want to go to Kelly Tarltons to see these animals but I don't know where it is. I know there are many creatures in the ocean, lots of things to learn about and many mysteries around the ocean.
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Hi Nicholas. Great writing about the boat ride. Dolphins are such graceful animals but the fog sounds pretty scary. Happy Learning!!!
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DeleteWow, I feel like your writing could lead to more stories! How many boats had that giant squid taken down before meeting you and its death?
ReplyDeleteGreat poster - I want to go to Kelly Tarltons to see these animals but I don't know where it is.
I know there are many creatures in the ocean, lots of things to learn about and many mysteries around the ocean.