I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work this week Nic. I enjoyed reading the rules for a modified version of "everyone's it". Your new game sounds like it was be very intense since you have to stay down if you get touched.
I enjoyed reading the poems you wrote this week. I like how you only used one word for each letter to complete the acrostic poem. Maybe next time you do an acrostic poem you could use a mix of sentences and one word per letter.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Nice work this week Nic.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading the rules for a modified version of "everyone's it". Your new game sounds like it was be very intense since you have to stay down if you get touched.
I enjoyed reading the poems you wrote this week. I like how you only used one word for each letter to complete the acrostic poem. Maybe next time you do an acrostic poem you could use a mix of sentences and one word per letter.
where is the question and what you enjoy
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