I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Awesome work Nicholas. You have completed these tasks to a high standard and I am very impressed. I especially liked your Minecraft video. You explained what you were doing clearly, so someone like me who does not know much about Minecraft can follow along. Next time maybe add some extra labels. For example you could have included a "minecraft" label for these tasks.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Awesome work Nicholas. You have completed these tasks to a high standard and I am very impressed. I especially liked your Minecraft video. You explained what you were doing clearly, so someone like me who does not know much about Minecraft can follow along. Next time maybe add some extra labels. For example you could have included a "minecraft" label for these tasks.
ReplyDeleteThanks Whaea Tamzin, I will be sure to add some more labels.
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