I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This is a great food review Nicholas. I can tell you really enjoyed the pani popo and I think it was a good idea to let the reader know what pani popo is. You used some great describing words such as luscious and delicious to make your writing interesting. Maybe next time you do a food review, you can give it a rating out of 5 stars.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
This is a great food review Nicholas. I can tell you really enjoyed the pani popo and I think it was a good idea to let the reader know what pani popo is. You used some great describing words such as luscious and delicious to make your writing interesting. Maybe next time you do a food review, you can give it a rating out of 5 stars.
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