If I was the president of class.

This is my writing task for this week, my NL is to describe what I see. 

If I was the president of the class I would throw pizza parties for everyone, and if they don’t like pizza we can have fried chicken. We can have candy like gummy bears or if you don’t like gelatin based candy, then we will have M&Ms. I will expand the duration of lunch time to 1hr 30min to 3 hours. And there will be less work. But people can choose what subjects they want. Another addition to the day would be to have more brain breaks during the day. Since some people are vegetarian we can have some vegetarian stuff for them. Also when it’s free time on Friday, we can watch Youtube. Yeah, that's all the things I would do.

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If i was the president of the class I will throw pizza parties for everyone in the class and if they dont like pizza we can have fried chicken we can have candy like gummy bears or if you dont like gelatin based candy then we can have M&Ms

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If I was the president of the class I would throw pizza parties for everyone in the class and if they don’t like pizza we can have fried chicken. We can have candy gummy bears or if you don’t like gelatin based candy then we can have M&Ms.

This activity was fun because we learnt how to edit which will be useful.

What would you do if you were the president of class?