For writing one of the tasks we got to do was make an animation about vegetables. So me and Nitya made and animation about vegetables.
Look at Nitya's blog cause she does some awesome stuff on there.
I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
For writing one of the tasks we got to do was make an animation about vegetables. So me and Nitya made and animation about vegetables.
Look at Nitya's blog cause she does some awesome stuff on there.
Kia ora Nicholas, I love the story you have told through your animation. I'm not sure if I like the idea of everybody else loving Broccoli though, because that's already my favourite vegetable and I wouldn't want there to suddenly be a worldwide broccoli shortage! One suggestion I have is that you could look for the section in the html code for your animation that sets the speed of the slides, and make it a little bit quicker. That way your animation would appear smoother. My last thought is that I love the way you linked in your buddy's blog in your post, so that you are showing how you worked collaboratively. What a great idea! Blog ya later, Mrs Cameron.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment and positive feedback Mrs Cameron.
DeleteI will make sure to change the html code.