I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wow, did you do that drawing yourself? It looks like you put a lot of effort into it. It also looks like a lot of fun to play with. I wonder how it works?
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Wow, did you do that drawing yourself? It looks like you put a lot of effort into it. It also looks like a lot of fun to play with. I wonder how it works?
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