Our topic for this week was about change in PCS.
I am a Year 5 student at PCS School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, March 26, 2021
Change LCS
If I was the president of class.
This is my writing task for this week, my NL is to describe what I see.
If I was the president of the class I would throw pizza parties for everyone, and if they don’t like pizza we can have fried chicken. We can have candy like gummy bears or if you don’t like gelatin based candy, then we will have M&Ms. I will expand the duration of lunch time to 1hr 30min to 3 hours. And there will be less work. But people can choose what subjects they want. Another addition to the day would be to have more brain breaks during the day. Since some people are vegetarian we can have some vegetarian stuff for them. Also when it’s free time on Friday, we can watch Youtube. Yeah, that's all the things I would do.
Red is crossing out a word
Green is adding a word.
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If i was the president of the class I will throw pizza parties for everyone in the class and if they dont like pizza we can have fried chicken we can have candy like gummy bears or if you dont like gelatin based candy then we can have M&Ms
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If I was the president of the class I would throw pizza parties for everyone in the class and if they don’t like pizza we can have fried chicken. We can have candy gummy bears or if you don’t like gelatin based candy then we can have M&Ms.
This activity was fun because we learnt how to edit which will be useful.
What would you do if you were the president of class?
Week 7 Reading
This my reading for week 7 and our NL for this week was figuring out unknown words using context clues or root words.
Friday, March 19, 2021
Houses LCS
This is my LCS and we were learning to understand symbolism by using images to create a meaningful design.
Thursday, March 18, 2021
Week 6 reading
I took a peek outside the window...
Hello, this is my space writing and my RT is to share the characters emotion.
Aliens arent real, right? Wrong. Aliens are real. You’re probably thinking “This guy is insane.” No, I thought I was too. But I saw an alien with my very own eyes. It all started when NASA assigned me to go and research weird sound waves the satellites captured from space and they could not trace it because they did not have the right technology. So me and my crew put on our spacesuits and the staff showed us to our rocketship. It was massive and it was nice in the interior, so me and my crew were launched into space. We got out our satellite dish and we managed to get some intel on the mysterious sound waves. We traced the sound waves and it was coming from an unknown planet and it was in the solar system but it wasn’t in the Sun’s orbit. We flew for 2 days until we reached the planet. When we got there, my jaw dropped to the ground. It was a civilization just like Earth. It had a fort made of clay and huts made out of clay. But then I forgot to control the rocket. We entered the atmosphere of the planet… BOOM. Our rocket broke as we hit the ground. Next thing I remember I was on a hospital bed with this alien doctor. “ W-where am I?” I exclaimed. He spoke a different language. “ What happened to the rocketship?” I wondered. I burst out of the bed and me and my crew checked the damage on the rocketship. It was massive. I looked at my crew and they shook their heads. Our oxygen tanks were gonna run out soon in a few days and we could’ve refilled it in the rocket but it's destroyed! The aliens were sad for us. I had lost hope. But the aliens had expert mechanics and they knew how to build everything including rocket ships! They just needed the materials. They mined out some aerospace grade aluminium and some titanium to build the rocket. And when it was finished we were amazed. The exterior was shiny, clean, polished and it was very neat. The interior was luxurious and it had a white couch and velvet pillows. So we thanked the aliens for saving our lives and we went back to Earth.
Imagine being stuck in space with nothing to do about it?
What would you do if you were in that situation?
Tuesday, March 2, 2021
Environmental Changes LCS
Here is my work for distance learning Week 4, I hope you enjoy!